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Bilge

Certified Tutor

2+ years

Bilge

Doctorate (e.g., PhD, MD, JD, etc.)
Bilge's other Tutor Subjects
9th-12th Grade Biology
9th-12th Grade AP Biology
10th-12th Grade Science
10th-12th Grade Writing

Private school admissions essays ask younger writers to do something surprisingly difficult: be genuine and specific in a very short space. Bilge approaches these essays by first drawing out the details that make a student memorable — a particular curiosity, a moment of growth, a quirky interest — t...

Education

Wesleyan University

Doctorate (e.g., PhD, MD, JD, etc.)

Middle East Technical University

Bachelor's

Eric

Certified Tutor

2+ years

Eric

Bachelor's
Eric's other Tutor Subjects
1st-10th Grade math
K-5th Grade Reading
Nutrition
SAT Essay

Private high school applications ask young writers to do something surprisingly difficult: be reflective and specific about who they are at twelve or thirteen years old. Eric excels at drawing out a student's genuine voice through targeted questions, then teaching them how to organize those ideas in...

Education

University of Chicago

Bachelor's

Alana

Certified Tutor

2+ years

Alana

Bachelor's
Alana's other Tutor Subjects
1st-12th Grade Writing
1st-12th Grade Reading
6th-10th Grade English
6th-8th Grade Chemistry

Having navigated the admissions process at Yale and later earned a Fulbright to Imperial College London, Alana knows firsthand how a well-crafted personal essay can open doors — and she brings that insight down to the middle school level, where the challenge is distilling a young person's personalit...

Education

Yale University

Bachelor's

Alicia

Certified Tutor

2+ years

Alicia

Master's/Graduate
Alicia's other Tutor Subjects
10th Grade AP Microeconomics
Pre-Algebra
Statistics
Middle School Math

Private school admissions essays ask young writers to do something surprisingly difficult: sound mature without sounding rehearsed. Alicia is particularly skilled at drawing out a middle schooler's genuine interests and personality, then coaching them to express those ideas in clear, confident prose...

Education

Columbia University

Master's/Graduate

University of Saint Joseph

Bachelor's

Kate

Certified Tutor

Kate

Masters, Environmental Engineering
Kate's other Tutor Subjects
AP Calculus BC
AP Calculus AB
College Algebra
Pre-Calculus

I'm available to tutor biology, chemistry, physics, math from Algebra up through AP Calculus, SAT test prep, and French. I've been tutoring students in science and math for 7 years. I also spent 8 months working and studying in France, and have tutored high school and adult students in French. When ...

Education

Massachusetts Institute of Technology

Masters, Environmental Engineering

Massachusetts Institute of Technology

Bachelors

Test Scores
SAT
1580
Jessica

Certified Tutor

Jessica

PHD, Medicine
Jessica's other Tutor Subjects
College Algebra
Calculus
Algebra
Honors Chemistry

I am a licensed physician from Florida who is currently changing careers. I graduated from the University of Pennsylvania in 2009 and have extensive tutoring and editing experience. While a student, I became a certified writing tutor through the Critical Writing Department. Since I completed my writ...

Education

Nova Southeastern University

PHD, Medicine

University of Pennsylvania

Bachelors, History

University of Pennsylvania

undergraduate

Test Scores
SAT
1540
Jai

Certified Tutor

9+ years

Jai

Bachelors in Electrical Engineering and Computer Science
Jai's other Tutor Subjects
Calculus
Algebra
Electrical Engineering
ACT Writing

I'm a recent Stanford graduate (Electrical Engineering and Computer Science), and have been working at a major Management Consulting firm for a few years now. I personally scored a 2360 (out of 2400) on the SAT and 35 on the ACT and was successful in gaining admission to several top universities. I'...

Education

Stanford University

Bachelors in Electrical Engineering and Computer Science

Test Scores
SAT
1590
ACT
35
Rhea

Certified Tutor

6+ years

Rhea

Bachelor of Science, Biology, General
Rhea's other Tutor Subjects
AP Statistics
AP Calculus BC
AP Calculus AB
Pre-Algebra

I am a current student at the University of Chicago. I am working towards a Bachelor of Science in Biological Sciences, and I am on the pre-medical track. I am extremely passionate about tutoring, and I have several years of experience tutoring students in my high school's learning center in various...

Education

University of Chicago

Bachelor of Science, Biology, General

Test Scores
Perfect Score
SAT
1550
ACT
36
Jeffrey

Certified Tutor

6+ years

Jeffrey

Doctor of Philosophy, Mechanical Engineering
Jeffrey's other Tutor Subjects
Pre-Calculus
Geometry
Calculus
Algebra

I am enrolled in the Mechanical Engineering PhD program at Rice University which will begin Fall 2020, and I am hoping to return to academia as a professor after earning my PhD. In the meantime, I am looking to share my passion for gaining knowledge, specifically in STEM, by educating the up and com...

Education

University of Notre Dame

Bachelor of Science

Rice University

Doctor of Philosophy, Mechanical Engineering

Test Scores
ACT
34
Erika

Certified Tutor

Erika

Master of Public Policy, Public Policy
Erika's other Tutor Subjects
Pre-Algebra
Middle School Math
Calculus
Algebra

I am available to tutor middle and high school math, history and test prep. I have tutored math and history in the past and I previously taught a test prep course at a school in Hanoi, Vietnam. I have a lot of experience teaching all the need-to-know tricks to doing great on the SATS/ACTS! When I am...

Education

Harvard University

Master of Public Policy, Public Policy

Test Scores
ACT
32

Frequently Asked Questions

Essays are often the most personal part of your application—they're where admissions officers get to know you beyond grades and test scores. A strong essay can be the deciding factor, especially when applicants have similar academic profiles. Private schools in Manhattan use essays to assess your writing ability, critical thinking, and how well you articulate your values and goals.

Many students struggle with finding their authentic voice—trying to sound "impressive" rather than genuine. Others face organization issues, unclear thesis development, or difficulty connecting their experiences to why they're a good fit for a specific school. Writer's block and over-editing are also common, leaving students stuck between wanting to perfect every sentence and actually finishing the essay.

Tutors provide targeted feedback on your essay structure, helping you develop a compelling thesis and organize your ideas logically. They work with you on finding your authentic voice, refining your arguments, and ensuring each paragraph serves a purpose. With personalized instruction, you'll also get guidance on revision strategies and learn how to balance showing rather than telling your story.

A strong essay has a clear, compelling thesis that answers the prompt directly, well-organized body paragraphs with specific examples, and a conclusion that reinforces your main idea. It demonstrates your personality and values through concrete details and honest reflection rather than generic statements. The writing should be clear and engaging, with varied sentence structure and vocabulary appropriate to your grade level.

Bring the essay prompt(s) from the schools you're applying to, any drafts you've already written, and notes about your ideas or experiences you want to include. If you haven't started yet, bring a list of topics you're considering. It's also helpful to share your school's guidelines or any feedback you've received from teachers—this helps tutors understand your starting point and tailor their guidance.

Ideally, start 2-3 months before your application deadlines to allow time for brainstorming, drafting, receiving feedback, and revising. If you're closer to the deadline, tutoring can still help you strengthen your essay quickly by focusing on the most impactful revisions. Even a few sessions can make a significant difference in clarity, organization, and overall impact.

Tutors help you move away from overly formal or generic language by encouraging you to write naturally about what matters to you. They provide feedback on which parts of your essay sound most like you, then help you apply that authentic tone throughout. Through revision exercises and discussion, you'll learn to balance professionalism with personality—letting your unique perspective shine while maintaining the essay's credibility.

Varsity Tutors connects you with tutors who have experience helping students craft compelling application essays. You can share your specific needs—whether you're starting from scratch, refining a draft, or preparing multiple essays—and get matched with someone who's a great fit for your goals and timeline. The process is straightforward, and you can start working with a tutor as soon as you're ready.

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