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Kaitlin
Hello! My name is Kaitlin, and I am a recent graduate from Yale University. As a STEM major on the premed path, I specialize in STEM subjects, but also excelled in high school english and reading courses. I am an FGLI student from a small town in PA and have made it this far through A LOT of studyin...
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Ronald
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Stony Brook University
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Ishaan
I am an undergraduate student at the University of Pittsburgh majoring in Computer Science. I have experience in tutoring friends with work in their classes and am strong in math. I will try to get the student to understand topics by showing them multiple ways to get to the solution!
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Current Undergrad Student, Computer Science

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Ethan
I am an undergraduate student at Washington University in St. Louis majoring in Neurobiology (B.S.) and minoring in Jazz Studies and Biomedical Physics. While I tutor many areas within math, science, and standardized test preparation, I am most passionate about biology and algebra because of my inte...
Washington University in St Louis
Bachelor of Science, Neuroscience

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Matthew
I recently left my post as a graduate student and researcher at Stanford University to pursue a career in medicine. My educational journey has been a long one, but I've always loved learning and that love has kept me in school (whether for better or worse :P) for more years than I can count. Though ...
Stanford University
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The University of Texas at Austin
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Ian
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Egal wie schlecht es dir geht, es gibt immer jemanden dem es schlechter geht.Having arrived in the United States 4 months ago, I would love to tutor German to students in need. I was born in Germany and lived there for 11 years of my life. The rest of my life I have lived in the UK, where my English...
Theodor Heuss Realschule Heidelberg
Associate in Nursing, German

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Jocelyn
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Clark University
Bachelor in Arts, Economics

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6+ years
Ankit graduated from Georgetown University School of Foreign Service with a degree in International Political Economy and is currently in his first year at Washington University School of Law. In high school, he was a state champion in debate and got 5's on 8 of his AP exams. Ankit has worked for tw...
Washington University
Juris Doctor, Law

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7+ years
Ellie
I am a software engineer at a small technology company and volunteer teaching AP Computer Science at a local high school. I am passionate about tutoring in computer science and math to help people understand the beauty in the two fields. When tutoring, I find that it is important to engage the stude...
Case Western Reserve University
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Frequently Asked Questions
Many applicants struggle with telling rather than showing, using generic language that could apply to any program or applicant. Common mistakes include:
- Focusing too heavily on past achievements without connecting them to future goals
- Writing an autobiography instead of a focused narrative about why this specific program matters
- Using clichés like "I've always been passionate about..." without supporting details
- Neglecting to address what makes their candidacy unique for the program
- Underestimating the importance of authentic voice and personality
Varsity Tutors connects you with tutors who help identify and eliminate these patterns, ensuring your statement stands out with specific examples and compelling reasoning.
While writing centers offer general feedback, personalized 1-on-1 instruction focuses specifically on your narrative, goals, and what admissions committees want to see. A tutor works with you over multiple sessions to:
- Develop a cohesive story that reflects your individual motivations and background
- Identify the most compelling examples from your experience and how to frame them
- Refine your voice and ensure authentic personality shines through
- Align your statement with specific program requirements and values
- Revise iteratively until your statement is genuinely ready for submission
This ongoing, customized approach helps you craft a statement that authentically represents who you are and why you're the right fit.
The best tutors for grad school personal statements have relevant experience with the application process and understand what different programs prioritize. Look for tutors who:
- Have experience in your field or understand the values and goals of your target programs
- Can identify strong narratives and help you articulate your unique perspective
- Provide constructive, specific feedback rather than surface-level editing
- Ask questions that help you dig deeper into your motivations and experiences
- Understand the balance between professionalism and authentic voice
Varsity Tutors connects you with experienced tutors who specialize in helping applicants craft compelling, authentic personal statements that resonate with admissions committees.
The number of sessions depends on where you're starting and how polished your statement is. Most students benefit from 4-8 sessions spread across their application timeline, which allows time for drafting, feedback, revision, and refinement. Early sessions focus on brainstorming, identifying your core narrative, and outlining, while later sessions refine structure, voice, and ensure every sentence serves your story.
Some applicants need fewer sessions if they already have a solid draft, while others working from scratch benefit from more. A tutor can assess your current work and recommend a personalized plan based on your specific needs and timeline.
A strong grad school personal statement should meet these benchmarks:
- It clearly articulates why you want to pursue grad school and why this specific program matters to you
- It includes specific, compelling examples that demonstrate your motivations and capabilities
- Your authentic voice and personality come through without compromising professionalism
- Every sentence serves a purpose—nothing feels generic or filler
- It addresses how you'll contribute to and benefit from the program
- Multiple readers (including a tutor) have reviewed it and found no clarity issues
Working with a tutor helps you recognize when your statement has achieved these elements and is truly ready for submission.
Yes. Different graduate programs value different elements in personal statements—MBA programs often prioritize career goals and leadership potential, while law schools focus on intellectual curiosity and commitment to justice. Philosophy PhD programs emphasize research interests and scholarly thinking.
Varsity Tutors connects you with tutors experienced in your specific program type, who understand what admissions committees are looking for and can help you tailor your statement accordingly. They'll help ensure your narrative aligns with the program's values and priorities while maintaining your authentic voice.
Many strong applicants feel stuck because they haven't yet identified what makes their story compelling. A tutor helps by asking targeted questions about your experiences, motivations, challenges you've overcome, and how they connect to your grad school goals. Often, the most powerful narratives come from unexpected places—a seemingly small experience, a challenge you navigated, or a question that shaped your thinking.
Through personalized 1-on-1 work, tutors help you excavate these stories, understand their significance, and weave them into a narrative that feels authentic and meaningful. This collaborative process often leads applicants to articulate motivations they didn't fully recognize on their own.
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